9 Sep 08, 22:29
LCY: damn..*subash? is that you?9 Sep 08, 22:29
LCY: the latest one...nice...soobthenoob...subash? is that you?19 May 08, 21:36
kim: nice1 May 08, 00:24
me::: o.o27 Apr 08, 00:41
kua: should start a book. lol. what a refreshing read.31 Mar 08, 21:20
BoBz: yup, I was informed that IKKi wrote the 2nd. Which explains few of my questions.. 
31 Mar 08, 20:56
# Bob: yo bob thx for dropping by and commenting...Thx for the compliments but ikky deserve credit for the 2nd part... I worte the first..31 Mar 08, 01:17
BoBz: You may have adjuncted the tear-striken, tear-tinted a little more than just once. Dialogues should be [" "], (Way beyond the horizon - consider ammending)31 Mar 08, 01:14
BoBz: The narrative genre as practised by YS here has been written with excellent control with consistent grasp on the use of thematic vocabularies as well as relational clauses. I would say it's great job.27 Mar 08, 17:22
SJK[private]XM: <3<3<3 the story again... jys! may ideas keep flowing in! =]24 Mar 08, 15:18
# everyone: the 2nd part of walking under the rain is out.. comments plz... if it's good there might be a part 3! ^^ TQ!24 Mar 08, 15:17
# Ikky + LCY: Tq for the kind explanation! and chuan yang, what ikky said..24 Mar 08, 15:14
♥mel: i was here! (:24 Mar 08, 14:53
ikki: yup but the spelling is ethiopia. ys mixed two spelling to make it sound cool24 Mar 08, 01:41
LCY: actually...unless im mistaken...euthopia is a country in africa...23 Mar 08, 10:46
ikki: i always thought people write 'euthopia' as utopia or ethiopia, i guess they changed the spelling huh?22 Mar 08, 20:52
# JY: ah yes thanks for pointing it out and for visiting...22 Mar 08, 17:01
Jy: Erm..."...is now nothing but black very black save a few street lamp and pub."should it be was? and the repeated usage of black.. tt seems like a mistake. Other than that, nice story! ;D22 Mar 08, 12:30
# LCY: GomenNasai22 Mar 08, 12:29
# LCY: elo tq for visiting.. I don't really like to post any story in a some what touching political issues..